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The Writer's Diet

Is your writing flabby?

We have so many words in our heads, right? All those great ideas beg to get onto paper: the exact color and texture of the cloak, the height of the castle, the neuance of the villian's expresssion. But too many adjectives and adverbs may be holding your readers back from the action and romance they want.

Click here for a great on-line tool that lets you know if your writing is too "fat". It will show you where you can trim some words and streamline your prose.

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